War!
I hit and abused. I bruised skins.
My claws tore more than just flesh.
I wounded both body and spirit.
I spoke damage and death.
I condemned and sentenced souls…
War!
It felt good to be in the battlefield.
I was lord of all punishment
I controlled the events in splits of time.
I staged the scenes and starred in them
I was great, I was real, I was plain.
War within…
I’m glad it didn’t happen without.
My own swords cut my flesh.
And I contained the rage to a tranquil calm.
The red in my eyes to a graceful white,
The noise in my bowels to a silent face…
War, War within…
I’m happy it never came without.
Mariana 
wovderful lines and little conflict within.
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Thanks Kaur Ji😝😝😝
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There’s no war that’s more deadly than the within. I read this four times and I just love it. Beautifully written
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Thank you! I’m glad you relate to this
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Wonderful 👌
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Thank you
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war within
such lovely kith and kin~
my queen
flee the misery
without and within
then
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Thanks dear
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Haa yes… the eternal internal struggle that takes no prisoners, and is determined to annihilate the enemy… WAR!!! The no holds barred battle of self… which one hopes… nay… one intends to awaken from…
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Well put! Thank you
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Oh My Lord Mariana You Sound A Bit
Like An Older Testament Punisher
Extreme In Dreams of
Nightmares Same
True in Each Of Us
There Is Destroyer
And Creator of Love True
Glad You Find Your Way
Out Before
Exploding
As Destroyer
More Than Kissing Creator
In Testament Of Loving All Real..:)
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I’m a soft human being 😂😂😂
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Haha
Me too
With SMiles🙌☺️
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😝
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Reblogged this on NEW OPENED BLOG > https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Very beautifully written!
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Thanks dear
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Good afternoon sister I have fever
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Good afternoon
Sorry, just take some ginger and lemon tea, you’ll be fine
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So thank you sister ,I try
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Please follow me
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Done
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Nicely expressed,,
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Thank you
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My pleasure 🙏🏻👍🏻
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Wonderful!!!
So raw is the war
that rages within
one’s Nightmares’
virtual realities
Dark nights of
the Soul
Survivors Xxxxxx
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Yurp, it’s a real war
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Mmmm. I get the inner turmoil in this one, which comes across, for me, in waves…emotional battlefield. Lovely piece, dear Mariana.
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Thanks Jeff, I’m happy that you can relate
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You’re most welcome, my friend.
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You are SAFE now Mariana!
Any male who thinks a Woman can’t become a Formidable Warrior called ‘Wonder Woman’ in times of CRISIS, and even outdo their male counter-parts, because of the difference in their egos’ agendas, is a FOOL!!!
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That’s some insight right there! 😃😃😃
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Such a beautiful poem 👏🏻🎉
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Such a beautiful poem. 👏🏻🎉 you have expressed very nicely.
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Great poem Mariana so powerfully expressed. War is truly an eruption especially our internal one. 💖💖💖
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That’s true. All we need to do is overcome it
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💖🤗
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