Continued from Tears That Never Fall.. Beginning.
There is a cluster of the citizens
Whose tears are diamond specks
These ones are rare, like the dinosaurs of old
They bleed their tears on one central ground.
Their tears build castles for Kings to come.
Their eyes are like pearls, men do not resist
They attract men who hold on like snails
Then the men discover the deep within and fall off
These crystalline beings bleed from the deeps of their heart
They leave behind gems for the Kingdom to collect
These beings are never happy
The love they find never stay
People think they never hurt because of the value they leave
Yet this kind is the most broken
Tell me, my dear reader.
How much of the love you receive,
Do you think is brewed with tears?
Mariana Dynasty 
85 responses to “Tears That Never Fall; Tomorrow is Here.”
I like your post years that never fall it’s really good
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Thank you Jay. I’m glad you do
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You’re welcome and thanks for your like as well
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and with a smile ๐
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Here’s my favorite person๐
Where have you been
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at work ๐
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What are you working on for so long a time?
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to different things ๐
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It’s okay then
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there is the work that others pay us and the work that we pay to ourselves
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๐ I understand.
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๐ ๐ ๐
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Oh wow thanks very true
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๐
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You’re welcome
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thank you! I’m happy about it ๐
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I love your work
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Thank you
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You’re welcome
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IDK but I’m here now
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๐ ๐
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Don’t cry
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Okay.
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Well maybe we can work together
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How ๐
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I mean we learn together or we could exchange numbers
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Thanks. You’re Nigerian, right?
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No American if that doesn’t matter
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Not at all dear.
I was doing some research and found a lot of sites that accept poetry submissions from your country
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That’s fast. I’ll reach out to you on whatsapp
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I donโt have it yet but I can get it
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Okay. Once you get it, please tell me
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Text me
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Beautifully penned..๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป
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Thanks dear. How do we say that in Hindu?
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You mean Hindi??
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Oh yes!
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๐this is what google says-เคเฅเคฌเคธเฅเคฐเคคเฅ เคธเฅ เคฒเคฟเคเคพ เคเคฏเคพ…!!
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You’re wicked๐๐
How do you expect me to read that?
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๐..hahaha..google it as I did๐คฉwell Iโm a proud Indian who resides here in Canada with limited knowledge in Hindi ๐same pinch..๐ค
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I would have wondered๐
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Can I make money off my poems up here and would you mind telling me how
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I’m sorry love, I’m also finding out
๐. But you can create a good audience then put ads on your blog. So you satisfy your readers and yourself too ๐
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Yes I can and I like the fact that it automatically publishes your work
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A new concept! I have often heard that stones grow and reproduce before being taken from the ground. I never heard this one! Thank You for sharing!
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It’s a fairy tale ๐
I’m a fan of tales
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I like it! Thank You for sharing! Blessings!
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I’m glad you do.
You’re welcome
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Yes
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joy
is a tude
a happy mood
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Nice description
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Wowwwwww great
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Thank you
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I am processing; here is my take away: Beautiful beings XX or XY are the most delicate and fragile beings on the planet because they depend on the others to make their beautiful facade relevant since they know that the chasm within is fraught with schisms, angst and misery that can easily absorb them since they are essentially empty vessels. Pretty but dumb as the trump inside card in a high stakes card game.๐๐โ๏ธ
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Your English is on a whole new level whoa! I had to process as well.
Yes that’s exactly part of the idea
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โก I Love MySelf EveryOne; that is enough, The Love of Another is a Bonus
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I agree. It’s a bonus babe
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I like this!
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I’m glad you do
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Fantastic artistry in you poetry. Loved the line, “Their tears build castles for Kings to come.”- profound imagery and truth! Great work. ๐โค
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Thanks Suzette. As usual, I’m just trying๐๐
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Same here. Still an apprentice …in fact always so. Blessings.๐๐
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Always an apprentice. That’s the way to learn
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True๐
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Excellent
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nice share
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Thank you
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Iโm sorry about that. Iโm Dominican born and I try too hard I guess. Regardless the work speaks for itself!๐โ๏ธ๐
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There’s nothing wrong with it. Pardon my way of admiration ๐
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Oh now I am really sorry but I donโt do admiration very well because I look for it in others never in myself. I struggle with my family and their lack of support. They donโt like me writing about my friends and family because I am unvarnished with the truth. Gracias mi amiga cuidate mucho por favor And keep creativity Alive! You see, thatโs my way๐ฏโฎ๏ธ๐๐โ๏ธ๐
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It’s well ๐
I forgot the Spanish reply for cuidate๐. Muchas gracias
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De nada! Buenas noche!๐โ๏ธ๐
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All of it is brewed with tears.
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Are you sure๐
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So beautifully written.. Tears are indeed an entity by themselves.
I have also written a poem titled ‘Tears’, I would love it if you could check it out.
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I’m on my way hehe
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Thank you so much!๐
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Thank you too
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Nicely penned. Enjoy this!
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Thanks Kally.
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Read the poetry again! Relevant, beautifully crafted and enduring with words of resonance! A joy.๐๐๐ฏโ๏ธ
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Thank you for the kind words
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Thank you for sharing such a beautiful and emotional piece. Sometimes tears can be from memories. Memories of things we love, and will never cease to love. Tears can be like the stars, too many to count, but each with beautifully significant.
Keep on creating, I look forward to reading more. ๐
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Thank you for your encouraging words. I’ll try post as many as I can
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