picture from WhatsApp
Let’s carve ourselves into wood,
Just you and I
So I can forever smell your lips
So I can prey on your lips when you sleep
Let’s carve our love into art
Dried and preserved
Here we can live more than a lifetime
We can inspire young hearts
Like a future revealed in the present.
Like sweet forever remaining
Not stone, not gold, just wood
Life and fleshy tied to you,
Forever.
28 responses to “Tied Till Eternity”
A somewhat unusual love but it is the most lasting. Conflict proof. The figures are magnificent.
I liked your poem. Very original. Good weekend
Manuel
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Thank you for this appreciation Manuel. Have a great weekend.
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Art and words on point
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Thank you sir
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🙂
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☺
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“Propinquitade”
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My! Dear, is this English?
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medieval Italian 😉
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It sounds extremely amazing. Like a waterfall in the thick of a rainforest
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who knows …
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only you and I
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Definitely something for me swipe file 😄
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haha
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🙂
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Very unique and well developed piece of writing.. shared it here..
https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/05/23/comment-with-a-title-life-in-words/
Let me know if you object. 🙂 Cheers.
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Thank you so much. I’m in no objection
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Reblogged this on The Searchlight.
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Thanks dear
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You’re welcome
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Stunning poem and artwork!
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Thank you. Too bad I can’t trace the source of the art though
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Good one:)love
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Thank you dear
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You and I
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Awesome
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Reblogged this on First Steps Creative Writing Course and commented:
see you write with passion and feeling
Why are so passionately driven, c??
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Love 🙈🙈
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