Blog Recaps; Purely Human

Happy 2020 friends! I had the best crossover ever, I spent it in God’s presence together with the rest of the family. How did you spend yours?

Here’s the second poem on the series “Blog Recap”

So noisy is your immortal soul
So breakable is your ever changing spirit
See your heart, so awesomely large
People stand along paths in awe
Admiring your well formed features
Young children imitate the way you walk
Mothers and wives wish to be like you
Fathers envious of he that sired you
Behind you, so highly of you do girls talk
But why?
Why did you leave in such a hurry?
Or did you run away?
I’m almost sure He meant to
That He was willing to fill your skull
But you left
Though I’m not sure you said goodbye
But if you did, then He gave you a thing
That helps you heal whenever you break
Something that quietens your noisy soul
And prevents you from killing these flies
Which feed from your plate
These that leave you running to that corner office
At the corner of your humble home

Published by Mariana Dynasty

Let's bleed love, life and advice. Let's exalt the pen.

11 thoughts on “Blog Recaps; Purely Human

  1. Reblogged this on Creative Writing Course and commented:

    Hi

    Thanks for the follow(s) * (+ likes), as the reason I write is to share.
    * (Though my family and close friends say it would be far more entertaining with a video-camera # in “real life”, rather than in cyberspace!)

    # By the way, do they still make them in today’s ever-faster changing world..or is it all done with mobile phones?

    (get with the times now,”luddite”* c – it should be a smart phone)

    * or so I was often called by my “my techno-geek” friend, Bill (“the gonk”)

    “total non-techno” c (who doesn’t possess a mobile phone, after a rather eventful’ experience some years back, whilst trying to walk, talk and chew gum at the same time)

    Who says men can’t multi-task!

    Kind regards and all the best with your blog

    “early bird” (very) * craig
    * my “best” time (by far)

    “You will do foolish things…but do them with enthusiasm.”
    – Colette

    PPS

    Best wishes from the First City to see the sun (in summer) …and we’re also the first to see the sunset and the stars (in winter-time)

    “I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness because it shows me the stars.”

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      1. thanks for the kind words, but I don’t want to be a ‘a good goody writing sweet’. “I want to write with a sense/spirit wild abandonment” (do a google, craig)
        enjoy the day and happy writing
        c

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  2. Amen. Christ’s love is unconditional, He asks only to be accepted as your Savior. Your life may not be easier – in fact, the world may try to change your mind, but you have an everlasting wellspring of hope, support, and guidance.

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