Hello, please give me a title for this Poem 🙈
I know you won’t remember…
My lips when you eat a melon,
Nor will you see my face..
When your eyes close for a moment
But you will reminisce the torture of my love
The cruelty in its purity
The ruthlessness of the passion that was
You will say I’m heartless,
Yet my heart was all I put on offer
You will tell them, I have no life
Yet that is what I gave you with each kiss
You have forgotten of my embrace
You have sought gold and dimes.
I know those shine…
But not as much as your eyes…
Every time I sang you a love song
29 responses to “Love Resonates”
How about ‘Gone’?
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Yes. It could do but not entirely
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I would take a title out of one of your lines. ❤️
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Love Resonates
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This sounds good
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Hi Life in Words
I have nominated your blog to Sunshine Blogger award. Details on my blog page.
Keep it up!
MJ
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It’s Victorian era painting lovely
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Yes it is
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So sickly sweet was my love that you got diabetes and we had to part
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Mercy 😹😹😹
That’s such a sad ending
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Good post
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Thank you
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Your welcome
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Ungrateful!
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Suits it 😊
Mind telling me why?
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Obviously because the poet gave everything to his/her lover, but the lover didn’t appreciate.
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That’s true
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Care to express not to impress-do you like this title?
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It’s perfect
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I am honored-thank you!
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The deceit of things that sparkle
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the art in your words👌👌
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I’m glad you like it!
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Reblogged this on The Searchlight.
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Thank you
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I love this line. :You will say I’m heartless,
Yet my heart was all I put on offer”. An Open Heart.
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Thanks Remy
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Very good poem!
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Thank you
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