I sat in the ashes, looking at the wounds that so lazily tried to metamorphose into scars, of all that was left of self imposed stabs and hurts.
I pressed each of all with grace, closing eyes, anticipating the pain that existed not. I winced at the slightest feeling, but there was no pain.
“Move out of the ashes. “
“Move out of the ashes.” a child whispered to the calm within me. But I moved not. I wanted to be there.
Then a prince came and started peeling of the dark scars one after another. In my laziness, I could only wail as every fragment detached, with every slice of fibre that he pulled.
He spoke with the wisdom engraved on stones of gold. He was meant for good, never for destruction. And it took me ages to realize that the searing pain was an illusion.
That it was all fear in a cloak of a daring demon, that my naked naivety fell at the sight of. With the teeth of iron that were but a decoy.
And as maidens sought for love on that rose filled day, I kept to myself begging for grace.
24 responses to “The Tears of My Scars”
This is a well versed creation. You are prolific. kudos
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Thanks a lot Nick
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Nice one!
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Thanks Ravi
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you are most welcome….yr good name pl?
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Mariana
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Great name! With your permission can i call you Mari?
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Yes Ravi, you can
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Thanks Dear Mari.so sweet of you!
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You’re welcome
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love and hug to you!
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Tremendous style! 😊
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Wow! It’s really an honour to receive such kind words
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The pleasure is all on this end, my new friend! 😉 😊
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I read your words over and over again, so heartfelt, honest and fragile ..
A tear fall down my cheek, because in your words I can recognize myself and it hurt, but at the same time it is beatiful🦋 very beatiful.
Thank you🦋
Love from Norway.
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Love from Kenya. I’m glad the words in the poem touched a heart
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And I am grateful🦋
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anyone with childhood filled with scarred memories will definitely identify with this poem. You have penned it so well that one can feel the hurt sentiment while going through the words.
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Thank you so much. I’m encouraged even more
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Wonderfully written Mariana!
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Thanks Raj
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This is so poignant, it touches my heart. Thank you.
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Thanks dear.
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